Tuesday, September 2, 2014

High School Debate: Practice Essay 9/2/14

COPY & PASTE THIS TEMPLATE INTO YOUR BLOG POST
Then you will write a practice speech on a topic of your choice.  It is due by the end of class.


Speech Outline


Attention Getting Device (AGD):



Preview (Roadmap):

Body Paragraphs:

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Conclusion:

Review:

In Summation:

Conclusion:


THANK YOU!


10 comments:

  1. Attention Getting Device (AGD):
    In the past gun control has only cost 20 million people there life's give or take a million


    Preview (Roadmap):
    Howe gun control will not lower the crime rate. How its the first step leading to a tyrannical government and finally, how in the end it will lead to mass murder and the destruction of the people of this great nation.

    Body Paragraphs:

    1. According to the Russian crime reports they have 3 times the murder rate and the have one of the stricter leveled of gun control in Europe






    2. Disarming is the first step to oppressing the people when Adolf Hitler took over a country one of the first things he did was to take away all the guns he could. But Hitler was not the first in that time to try to oppress the people Stalin also pulped the same stunt





    3. Which leads in to my next topic how it leads to tragedy Hitler killed 12 million and those people could not fight back and Stalin killed ruffle 30+ million we don't know the exact number because he wasn't as thero with the numbers and in china the Japanese along with Meow killed 50 million people so in 30 years of gun control over 100 million people lost there lives thank to the inability to fight back.




    Conclusion: I hope this speech has help educate you in the danger that gun control proposes.

    Review: we've talk about haw gun control can and will go horably wrong how it will no lower the crime rate how it leads to croup governments and in the end how it will cost millions of people there lifes

    In Summation:

    Conclusion: by allowing gun control is Allowed to continue it will inevitably lead to mass death and destruction!!!!!!

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  2. Speech Outline

    Topic: Carriages vs. Automobiles

    Attention Getting Device (AGD):

    "...CARS KILL CHILDREN." - Vermont Dept. of Motor Vehicles

    Preview (Roadmap): Talk about how dangerous cars are. Talk about how carriages are better. Talk about how we don't need cars. Appeal to emotions.

    Body Paragraphs:

    1. Imagine if we lived in a backwards society where our primary mode of transportation that most people use every day also killed tens of thousands of people per year simply due to tiny errors of human attention. Imagine tens of thousands of grieving families suffering from such a grim condemnation solely due to the careless neglect of random strangers. Well, you shouldn’t have to imagine much, because that’s the world we’re living in right now.

    2. But, there exists a solution: we simply replace cars with horse-drawn carriages! Such vehicles have a great number of advantages over conventional automobiles. For one, they have a far lower fatality rate. This very simply solves our tens-of-thousands-of-people-dying issue. But, in addition, they are also much more eco-friendly, as a horse outputs fewer greenhouse gasses than a car. Plus, the rides will be longer, so you’ll have more time to nurture healthy relationships with the other passengers!

    3. Now, you may be thinking, “our society will never function with such slow vehicles!” But I beg to differ! Human civilization prospered on nothing but horses and simple carts for millennia! It’s only within the last century that we have become so dependent upon our shiny little wheeled machinations. They have become our crutch, our addictive drug. Simply removing them from the equation will do wonders to strengthen our species and our society.

    Conclusion:

    Let us replace automobiles with horse-drawn carriages. It is the smartest way to move forward.

    Review:

    I may seem mad, but I am not mad! Automobiles are mad! They kill people! Horses don’t kill nearly as many people! We don’t need cars! I have perfectly valid and reasonable arguments!

    In Summation:

    Automobile accidents kill tens of thousands of people per year. Horse-drawn carriages are better for the health of society. Automobiles are not needed for the prosperity of humanity. Automobiles KILL CHILDREN.

    Conclusion:

    Abolish automobiles, I say! For the sake of prosperity, for the sake of humanity, for the sake of the children!

    THANK YOU!

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  3. AGD: warriors not allowed to fight.

    topic adhd in the military

    so my topic is on the strict regulation on people in the military with adhd and other mental deseases. and about the fear and and unwilliness to work with people with adhd


    so there have been numerous studys done on people with adhd in high stress sitation these studys were done in europe and asia and south america. these studys focused on and off the battle field. showing natural confidence unbelievable strength and stamana in all leadership situations.

    the off side about ADHD is that anxiety doubt and depression all come with adhd which means they have a high chance of suicide this is a sad but true fact. but the thing is the military already has a high risk suicide with the solders in the field who dont have any disorders. and then by the time they join statistics say they have already gotten over there suicidal tenences meaning the know how to control deal and reject the act of suicide.

    becides having people who are naturally good at the field this is only natrual though because studys also say this comes through genetics of people (breed for battle) in warrior cultares so greece,rome, eygpt, isreal, germany, france, england, scotland, ireland and denmark samoa. so there anceisters fought and lived through every war and its battle forged and it is accepted every where accept here so why does the us not.

    reveiw adhd is battle forge so let those who were born to fight fight.
    conclusion work with and have less strict standards then in current place
    thank you

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  4. Attention Getting Device (AGD): Should we be allowed to keep our guns?



    Preview (Road-map): We should keep guns; taking guns away will not lower crime rates.

    Body Paragraphs:

    1. We should be able to keep our guns. Taking Guns away from citizens will not lower crime rates. More people die each year from hammers, baseball bats, clubs, rocks, knives, and other sharp objects than guns. It’s clearly stated in the second amendment “the right of the people to keep and bear Arms will not be infringed.


    2. Even if people were killed from guns each year and the citizens guns were taken away the amount of people that are killed from hammers, baseball bates, clubs, knives, ext.…would only increase. The statistics from the begging are with people’s ability to protect themselves with a gun. There’s an old saying “the only way to stop a bad guy with a gun is a good guy with a gun.”




    3. What will happen if Citizens lose their guns? Well first of all what about the people that have guns illegally or aren’t registered, how is the government supposed to take their guns away if they don’t even know they have guns in the first place? Second of all the bad people and gangs will still have guns. Third how are you going to defend yourself? You’re going to have to rely on the police even more. If you can even contact them that it could take them 5-10 minutes to arrive that’s precious time that could mean you, your family, or co-workers lives. When a responsible firearm career could end the threat before it hurts anyone. If citizens don’t have guns how will be the only people that have power? Gangs, the Police, Terrorists.



    Conclusion: US citizens need to keep our guns. Crime rates will only higher if guns are taken. It will only be harder to protect yourself and others. I hope this speech has helped you understand a idea of what the circumstances will be if guns are taken away.

    Review: I have spoken about some of the statistics, what would happen if guns were taken away.

    In Summation: Don’t let the hopeless dreams of someday citizens “not having to have guns” fool you.

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  5. High School Debate: Practice Essay 9/2/14
    COPY & PASTE THIS TEMPLATE INTO YOUR BLOG POST
    Then you will write a practice speech on a topic of your choice. It is due by the end of class.


    Speech Outline


    Attention Getting Device (AGD): college crisis



    Preview (Roadmap): college football players should get paid

    Body Paragraphs:

    1. they are putting there body on the line so many risks they brake bones and more for your enjoyment they should get paid to at lest pay hospital bills






    2. they are doing exactly what NFL does and more they get a lot of people like NFL there well known but only some health is coverd





    3.yes some do it cus they love the game but the people watching love it to they bring so much money to the school




    Conclusion: college football players should get paid

    Review:players bring money to the school and get hurt need to pay for that and other

    In Summation: college should get paid

    Conclusion:


    THANK YOU!

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  6. Attention Getting Device (AGD):
    Drugs. Drugs are involved in this world a lot more than you think. They effect people in such a negative way. They take over your life and effect the people closest to you the most.


    Preview (Roadmap):
    Drugs come from all over the world, think of a place and I guarantee they have a specific drug that is the most popular. Drugs are highly illegal, Why? Because they effect your body so negatively. Your brain development shuts down. And it is very harmful for yourself and the others around you. The people that start using drugs always have a reason, weather its positive or not.
    Body Paragraphs:

    1. Every Country, State and even cities, have their own main drug for that area. Some U.S states have marijuana legalized. Mostly for medical use, but in some areas they have it for recreational uses.






    2. Drugs are very harmful to yourself and the others around you. The hardcore drugs such as Heroin, Crystal Meth, Cocaine & Spice have major effects on your brain and body development. They also mess with your physiological thoughts. They will make you do weird things that you normally wouldn't want to do.





    3. With the use of these drugs, comes many negative consequences. Most people start using because something tragic happened in their lifetime and this is their coping skill. Not a very good one, but it works... For a while. But once you think you are better, hell has just begun. Now you have to deal with coming off of the drugs, not very many people make it through. When they don't you have the risk of overdosing and killing yourself.




    Conclusion:
    Drugs are bad. But I don't blame the people or treat them differently for the choices they make. Because It's their life not mine. I can't control them.
    Review: Drugs have many consequences.

    In Summation: Be careful and learn more about the person before you judge them by their choices.

    THANKS MAANNN!!

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  7. Speech Outline


    Attention Getting Device (AGD):
    picture a hot summer day and your really thirsty but you dont want water sounds to blan and boring, and lemonde is to boring but what do you grab a soda.

    Preview (Roadmap):
    first i will be talking about soda brands, then the uses of soda, and finally how soda is made.
    Body Paragraphs:

    1.soda brands there are only 2 surprisingly right Coca~Cola an Pepsi, but what most people dont know is that there are several other brands under those 2 companys for Coke for example we have mellow yellow, sprite, fanta, and Dr. Pepper. for Pepsi we have mountain dew, izze, and amp.

    2. soda has many uses ranging from cleaning objects such as pennys, tables, and also cleaning on the inside of you helping you get rid of some of that nasty bacteria. we also have cooking uses you can put it in all sorts of stuff such as cake, meats, and all sots of others foods if our daring enough to.

    3. Now how is soda made its a complicated process but it is easy to understand, first it starts off as the perfect mixture of water and solution, then it moves along a converyor belt to the bottling and canning where it is first combined with carbon dioxide and then will put into the bottles and cans where it will go to pallets and be staked shrinked wrapped put into trucks and set all over the U.S.

    Conclusion: as you can see there are many types of sodas under just two cpmpanys, and that there are many uses for soda and cooking and helping you get rid of some nasty stuff inside you, and finally that the soda making process is not hard to understand but is really hard to make.

    In Summation: Soda is a great alternative to lemonade and water.

    THANK YOU!

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  8. Attention Getting Device (AGD): Say you are walking down the streets of Compton California, you see 4 big guys sprinting after you and you have no where to run.
    What do you do to protect yourself?


    Preview (Roadmap): Address the importance of guns. Explain why it would be a bad idea to ban guns. what you can do to protect yourself.

    Body Paragraphs:

    1.Guns are super important to civilians all the way up to protecting our country. For many and the majority, they provide safety and reassurance for us. In a in-perfect world there are always going to be dangers and obstacles you will face in your life time so why not eliminate as many as you can by protecting yourself. Just because a small majority of people abuse the privilege doesn't mean it should be banned for everyone thats used guns for hundreds of years.


    2.Banning guns is a terrible idea. I say this because like everything illegal there will be no way ever to completely eliminate the presence of of the substance (like drugs they are highly illegal, people still do them). You will only be taking guns away from people that have obtained these weapons legally on record. Giving the bad people the upper hand because now they have guns and the government took yours and isn't going to sit on your front porch protecting you 24/7.


    3. Although owning a weapon isn't for everyone. You should definitely take some shooting lessons and study up on what you are buying. They can be highly dangerous in the wrong hands as we all know. I think informing people on where to put them, how to shoot, when you should use your weapon could benefit our society highly. If someone knows you have a gun even if they have a gun they are not going to want to risk robbing or jumping you they are going to go for someone without a gun.




    Conclusion:You shouldn't be allowed to take away someone's freedom to own a weapon unless they have lost the privilege themselves. It's our constitutional freedom to own and shoot and protect ourselves from dangers we are presented with. It's been this way four hundreds of years and should stay this way. From my personal experience its protected me, I don't own a gun (not 18) but someone else has had one and it was highly effective.
    Review:

    In Summation: Guns are good. Until someone can find a way to protect me as effective and as versatile as them they should NOT be banned.



    THANK YOU!

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